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| Naomi Schemer 2005-05-13 ch 6,  | abuseWait...so Will's dad is on the none-homophobic side? I didn't know that...Well, it explains a lot. |
| jessdarkwater 2005-05-10 ch 6, | abuseHaha... I found that hilarious. I love the point that Will's dad is making... Lol... |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-05-02 ch 5, | abuseAW, William has a little crush...XD |
| jessdarkwater 2005-04-28 ch 5, | abuseHaha. That little exchange was amusing! And about Will finding Adrian hot, well know I wanna see those pics! Lol... |
| dyers-eve 2005-04-24 ch 4, | abuseOh, that fills in some blanks. I like Will so i hope you write more Xx |
| jessdarkwater 2005-02-23 ch 4, | abuseThat has to be the best chapter, the whole finding out and the rules... god, I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall! |
| junesnow 2005-02-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseYour story is wonderful and I haven't reviewed before just because it was an eat and go situation. I'd like to say that all your work is beautifully written and I do hope no one tries to steal anything again. |
| FlowingQuill 2005-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. That is horrible. I am so sad that you are not posting writings any more. You had a good thing going for you. It is disappointing when someone does that. I wish you the best! |
| MooseDeEvita 2005-02-11 ch 3, | abuse*sighs* I did really like this, and for some reason his whole character caught my attention in the first book |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-02-01 ch 3, | abusePoor Will. I know most people hate him (or dislike him), but I really hope he gets someone. |
| jessdarkwater 2005-01-30 ch 3, | abuse"I enjoy hating people most of the time, but it would be nice to find someone who I actually love. I wouldn’t be so lonely then." Story of my life. Lovely as usual, can just picture you reading this (as you said that Camille was based on you). |
| Pundit 2005-01-02 ch 2, | abuseIt's interesting. Personally, I've always felt really bad for Will. He's always struck me as the kind that's starved for affection. I can't help but feel aweful for him, even if he does do stupid/insensitive things. |
| Naomi Schemer 2004-12-19 ch 2, | abuseShe didn't know he was gay?You probably said it last chapter and I didn't pay attention. Poor Camille, she probably felt left out, not being told for so long. |
| jessdarkwater 2004-12-19 ch 2, | abuseand the bi thing is true as well? haha. nice chappie, a cute will is a shy will... |
| ddz008 2004-12-19 ch 2, | abuseAw he was so nervous!It must be difficult to tell to the people you care the most about something they may hate.Hope to see the next chapter soon!Keep writing!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |