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Naomi Schemer 2005-05-13 . chapter 6
Wait...so Will's dad is on the none-homophobic side? I didn't know that...Well, it explains a lot.
jessdarkwater 2005-05-10 . chapter 6
Haha... I found that hilarious. I love the point that Will's dad is making... Lol...
Naomi Schemer 2005-05-02 . chapter 5
AW, William has a little crush...XD
jessdarkwater 2005-04-28 . chapter 5
Haha. That little exchange was amusing!

And about Will finding Adrian hot, well know I wanna see those pics! Lol...
dyers-eve 2005-04-24 . chapter 4
Oh, that fills in some blanks. I like Will so i hope you write more Xx
jessdarkwater 2005-02-23 . chapter 4
That has to be the best chapter, the whole finding out and the rules... god, I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall!
junesnow 2005-02-20 . chapter 3
Your story is wonderful and I haven't reviewed before just because it was an eat and go situation. I'd like to say that all your work is beautifully written and I do hope no one tries to steal anything again.
FlowingQuill 2005-02-20 . chapter 1
Wow. That is horrible. I am so sad that you are not posting writings any more. You had a good thing going for you. It is disappointing when someone does that. I wish you the best!
MooseDeEvita 2005-02-11 . chapter 3
*sighs* I did really like this, and for some reason his whole character caught my attention in the first book
Naomi Schemer 2005-02-01 . chapter 3
Poor Will. I know most people hate him (or dislike him), but I really hope he gets someone.
jessdarkwater 2005-01-30 . chapter 3
"I enjoy hating people most of the time, but it would be nice to find someone who I actually love. I wouldn’t be so lonely then."

Story of my life. Lovely as usual, can just picture you reading this (as you said that Camille was based on you).
Pundit 2005-01-02 . chapter 2
It's interesting. Personally, I've always felt really bad for Will. He's always struck me as the kind that's starved for affection. I can't help but feel aweful for him, even if he does do stupid/insensitive things.
Naomi Schemer 2004-12-19 . chapter 2
She didn't know he was gay?You probably said it last chapter and I didn't pay attention. Poor Camille, she probably felt left out, not being told for so long.
jessdarkwater 2004-12-19 . chapter 2
and the bi thing is true as well? haha. nice chappie, a cute will is a shy will...
ddz008 2004-12-19 . chapter 2
Aw he was so nervous!It must be difficult to tell to the people you care the most about something they may hate.Hope to see the next chapter soon!Keep writing!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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