It's like Hatori-san and Kanna-chan's life story! *tears* So sad! I like this poem... I like all of your poems! Now, 12 more to read! Keep on writing!

very sad piece. tragic, filled with angst and bittersweet emotion. nicely conveyed, i like this. beautiful, i love your writing style. nice use of contrast. it works well in this piece. awesome job. keep up the good work!

Very mistical (fancey word)!Enjoyed the back/forth way and making it show a casue / effect happening :)

I really love this. You sound like a really cool person, and you are right most preps are annoying, but a few are cool ( my 2 best friends are them surprisingly) Keep writing your poetry

Pretty pretty. In a creepy way. Like how the evil witch in the wizard of oz says, "I'll get you, my pretty." - that sort of pretty. Yes, I am out of my mind right now. No, I don't need a liberal dose of medicine. Yes, I've had enough thank you. Yes, I am slightly dizzy. No, I think I'll do just fine sitting in front of Tyler. Yes, I do understand that I am making you stare in utter confusion at the horrifying stupid words appearing on Marla's screen. Ok. I'll stop now ... were you thinking of Wolf's Rain when you wrote this? First line sounds bitterly like it. Anyway, I liked it. You used a plethora (hehe, inside Chapman joke...) of dashes. Brava! A new thing, an entirely Dickinsonian (the Emily) thing, a me-thing, a - ah, I'll stop now, yes. Hope you got my other review explaining why I havn't called so far (I DID send you that review, right?). Before I confuse you or my addled brain any further, I suggest I stop writing. Farewell and nevermore, as the raven quoth ... oh god. Yes, I should be going now. This is all getting to my poor head.Yoo-jin

this is a great poem. i can completely relate to it. great imagery.

owie, that really is painful! but still very well written and oragnized...another classic poem from you!^_^-anime freakizoid X^_^X

*wince* Ouch. That's painful. And it hits so close to home... Amazing. Suteki da ze.