I'm afraid to die. I know it's such a cowardly thing to say, but at least I'm not lying about it. I don't want my family to be sad. My friends. My spirit. No matter what, I would be so sad. Heh... kinda selfish...Anyway, I like the poem. You know just what to say, and you don't put in anything that is not needed. I do that a lot ^_^"

awesome insightful piece. and so true. it's the simple things in life that we often take for granted that should be most appreciated. great job on this.

this is very touching and real. You make your stuff have great flowing. good job!

It's a sad feeling when you find out that heaven's not enough. Especially because every human being on the planet wants to be that special person whose not a hypocrite, who can be happy with what they have, they don't need anything, maybe just love, maybe just enough to get by on and live peacefully with, but if not one moment theres another in everyones life when they realize what they've been thinking, doing, feeling, and its as papinful as a stab in the kidney. For some at least.

Again, you've utilized the dashes! - Yes, against my better judgement, I have decided to review another one of your works. I am sorry to put you through the miserable ordeal of reading in between my words, but nonetheless I hope this puts you out of mind of your illness. I sound like Ben Franklin. Kuso. Anyway, back to poetry. I liked the comparisons on each line. "So smile when you can - don't be afraid to be a fool ... becuase ... Heaven's not enough" How true. A bit uplifting coming from you (hehe, joking, joking, no need to rip apart that Hiei picture you drew...no seriously, KEEP AWAY FROM MY HIEI PICTURE!), but true. The entire poem is true, and the line where you described waiting so completely for the end of the movie that you missed the scenes in between - so, so, heartwrenchingly true. Koe, you observe too much.

Yoo-jin

Y'know, I used to feel the same way but the truth is...Heaven's more than enough. Heaven is the one place where perfect peace and unconditional love surrounds you. And isn't it great to realize that we have a God up there who loves us so much that he would give his son to die for us? Well, nice poem nonetheless :) Keep it up!

Oh and if you have the time, try reading my story, Light in Darkness. I'd love to hear what you have to say :) God Bless~

~CB414

Cool. Kinda creepy (In a good way!).Yup, 'tis awesome. Keep up the good work!

Forsaken

hi hi again, that really is a fact for most people that heaven isn't enough...keep up the wonderful work!-anime freakizoid X^_^X

Uwaa~ Very profound and poignant. ~*accolades*~

Excellent poem. I love the overall feel of it and how you worded it. Heaven's not enough... heh, I can relate to the feelings you portrayed. Keep up the good work.

-Anathema