I love this story! It's great! I'm in love with Denton.

hah, wow.

This has to be one of the best 'Badboy+Goodgirl=Not-so-meaningless-sex' stories, ever. har har.

Seriously, I love both your characters, they're well rounded and genuine, and your dialogue is very witty too. Props.

*Favorited*

Brilliant.

I love the plot, so ** original. I love that your characters have flaws, and don't miraculaously let go of them when they meet each other. I love how realistic it is. And I love the way you write.

Keep it up :)

love it

im kinda confused about the timeline now... its been maybe a couple of weeks after they got together but shes still with nick in 3 months time... its hard to see them draggin on like this for a couple more months

i sure am going to miss the future parts of the story but i guess it had to end sometime else the story is never going to catch up.

im starting to love this story. sometimes the future thing kinda confuses me since it went from like 3 months to 2.9months. but still im loving the idea. your a very talented writer keep up the good work, cant wait to read your other stories

nice story. love the past future thing you got going on.
very original. i just love the fact that theres finally a story where the guy is the underprevilaged one... was kinda getting sick of the poor girl going for the super popular rich boy

love love love it! :D

aww. that was gorgeous. congratz on finishing it. lol, i'm trying to convince myself to write the second chapter of my story. :P just one thing though, i was a bit confused about where the present met the future if that makes any sense? i dunno if it was in your author's notes or anything (i dont usually read them when the story is complete) but yeah i was just a bit unsure, but i figured it out anyway and its just a small flaw in a great story so yeah.

Their story is just so COMPLICATED but you got me hooked wanting to know what's going to happen. I thought it was giong to nbe cliched, but the whole affair thing...good job!!

i loved this!

Really entertaining story... the characters were very convincing.
I love Denton! I think he was just too cute in the story. You couls have made more obstacles for them to overcome, like Jason and Jenna hooking up, but thats just my opinion.

Good job!

Kon

Fantastic story!


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I loved this story! Good job!