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| suicidal-greeting 2005-01-04 ch 1,  | abuseCooL! I like this one! I know I haven't reviewed in a LONG time (I'm so mean!) but I've been trying to get through my own effing problems which HAVEN'T been going away >_< But ok Anyway. I really like this piece. Just a suggestion. I think maybe you should try rhyming a bit. I know that's not exactly the type of writing you like to do. But I think it would work if you tried. Like an A-B-A-B way or something. You know what I mean? Like: You should try rhymingIt's really funThen maybe you'll start findingYou're songs will be # one!! I don't know! Just a suggestion though ok? I'm not trying to be rude but I'm just giving some ideas. I love your poems/songs just the way they are, but maybe try something new if you feel like you want to take the time to do so! Anyway. Again, great poem (no surprise ^_^) and keep it up!! Much Love-->Suicidal_Greeting |
| someday-i-will 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI think it does capture the emotion and feeling but it's a bit repetative. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-12-18 ch 1, | abusei love this. it captures exatcly what it feels like when this happens. |
| NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDo... 2004-12-18 ch 1, | abuseHi, I'm writing to let you know I haven't been uploading any of my work because someone has been plagerizing it. Until everything is cleared up, I'm keeping off of fictionpress. However, if you have a livejournal you can add me (xlolita_complex) and my work will be on there, and there's also a syringeoverload community if you're interested. Thanks so much for taking your time to enjoy my work ^^Dolly |
| little demon51 2004-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseIsn't that so true?? Way too many people lie to get people to notice them in a certain way and it sucks. If only people could just tell the truth and not lie all the time. You are so talented and i'm srry i havent reviewed all of your songs but i have read them. my screen name is lil-sun-and-moon I just didnt sign in ^.^ Keep up the good job!! |
| Ajna 2004-12-18 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. I can absolutely relate. Do you have a tune for this? Anyway, excellent job; this is very honest and straightforward. Keep up the good work! -Anathema |