 Keith Andrew 2005-02-02 . chapter 1*claps* i really did enjoy that. The passage of time in the poem had a nice momentum and said eveything that needed to be said, not too short and not too long. -Keith Andrew |
 astro-traveling-angel 2005-01-09 . chapter 1Well done! |
 white-clouds 2005-01-01 . chapter 1You got me thinking a lot about life. Sigh, I'll be 15 in 3 months time. I don't really want to grow up that fast. |
 jen 2004-12-18 . chapter 1 I love this poem.The way it flows is really nice; how you connected the ages. Great job. |
 InfiniteDreamer04 2004-12-18 . chapter 1This was beautiful. You were able to capture the ins and outs, ups and downs of every year of a persons life and it was very impacting. Now i dont wanna grow up! Good job, though.
~MT |
 Amethyst Eyed Cynical One 2004-12-18 . chapter 1wow.i like it! |