Hey I love your story it's awsome

shadowpriestess

Still excelent!!

gwe- creepy! Very good, like the character, how she hates how she's killing, but must kill anyway. Good luck with publishing!! ^-^

And that concerns me in what way?

Just so you know. You're summary turned me off. That's why I'm not reading this story.

Sounds good. Whatever you do I'm sure I'll love it! Bu update soon beofer the suspence kills me... lol

i love ur ideas. i think ur story is great to begin with. anything that u think will make it better i agree with

~kara~

sounds good to me.

:) CD

Yes, its great, it'll really give the novel a kick. I'd write more but I gtg take out the trash

kewlness

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wow, that was one of the best stories I've ever read online. And it's definately as good, and better than a lot of published stories. I mean, I usually don't go for vampire type stories, but this was awesome! I hope you get this published! now off i go to read the others..

wow-really good-sad, but touching

~kara~

Awesome! Very kool. So wats the deal with Demonica?

sweet ending.

:) CD

I really like how her blood lust is a voice of its own. I like how she is suffering with the grief she feels. It's very good. I'll try to read more of it later!