For death has finally taken

And the life? Forsaken

- the included question just made it even more powerful

it's very beutiful. i wish it was longer.

Wonderful... Your poetry is really beautiful. Oh, and thank you for reviewing my story!

This is beautiful work.

It is truely a feeling poem ... your talent for writing is awe-inspiring!

Thank you for reviewing my poem 'Silent.'! I love this poem. Just one question: Is 'blooded' a word? Anyways keep up the great work! I'm adding you to my favourites list.

Nice choice of words. I think it really leaves an impact and it's messege is evident. Well done.

Beautiful. Just Beautiful.

this is a sad poem. I love the title. How you brought it into the poem (or take it from the poem depending if you titled it before or after lol)

anywho. great poem. I liked it... exspecially:

"In the shinning of deathIs a single flower, dusted in ashes"

*Silent Writer*

Thank you for your reviews! )