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| sonrisa por favor 2005-08-14 ch 1,  | abusevery intimate. It felt like I was the person in the poem. I was in costa rica too, so I can easily relate to this experience. |
| little sis 2005-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abusepretty good. i can see how u got the idea from costa rica. |
| Indigo-Andie 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abusein so many was this is a very sensual poem...beautiful...caught the exotic/ erotic nature of the foreign... |
| Escapist 2004-12-23 ch 1, | abuseI agree with one of your other reviews for this poem. Reading it, I just had a stream of amazing imagery floating through my head. It is relaxing, as well. And don't you just love warm nights? |
| Bigfoot111 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abuseit has some great imagry, i especially like the last stanza ciao |
| ChloBug 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abusei like it, very relaxing. nice imagery |
| Arsenic336 2004-12-18 ch 1, | abuseOoh, this is pretty. It sounds like an awesome experience. |