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| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-02-12 ch 1,  | abuseYou know, I've seen a few people here do this very thing - have a collection of tidbits of poems, things that didn't quite come together, whatever - and I'm thinking I should do the same. Hmm. At least get the stuff out there, see if anyone could finish the piece. Anyway. First one: This is cute. Humor in the midst of an apocalypse. Classic. Keep writing! :) |
| yesterdaydream 2007-11-12 ch 22, | abuseI went to this one first because the title interested me. I love these lines in particular :"that it was just a mistake, so easy to make/ so convenient to fake." And I like the way you use the flashing between viewpoints at the start. |
| lucidspiritdreamer7 2007-11-04 ch 50, | abuseoh this is good,I can relate all to well lol. |
| lucidspiritdreamer7 2007-11-04 ch 51, | abuseWho is this regarding to? I can relate but only because someone murdered my little brother over ten years ago they still have no awnsers,and though my mom wrote a book about what we went through while he was missing and after we found out, we still feel cheated, We still want Answers. "Who, and why?"but well written my friend. |
| lucidspiritdreamer7 2007-11-04 ch 52, | abuseThis is dfeep but i don't Fully understad it.Who or what inspires this? |
| lucidspiritdreamer7 2007-11-04 ch 53, | abuseThis sounds like you have been haunted by that painful memory, may I ask you who ,or what inspired this? |
| lucidspiritdreamer7 2007-11-04 ch 56, | abuselike this alot. |
| wishing.on.echoes 2007-09-21 ch 10, | abusethe pill bottles of las vega showgirls- don't wait too long. |
| lucidspiritdreamer7 2007-08-25 ch 48, | abuseThis is a great poem short but sweet. Lol |
| shola 2006-08-18 ch 46, | abusebest in show |
| shola 2006-08-18 ch 40, | abusewho wrote his five-finger essays on the back of your cervix. amazing |
| shola 2006-08-18 ch 38, | abusehurts my ears ringing true |
| shola 2006-08-18 ch 32, | abuseties in oddly with a strange cocktail of a reading list I've got going. So it means more, I guess |
| shola 2006-08-18 ch 31, | abuseagain achingly beautiful |
| shola 2006-08-18 ch 24, | abusegorgeous |