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| recycle rhymes 2008-04-19 ch 194,  | abuseinteresting response. lol i love the title, made me chuckle a bit. |
| recycle rhymes 2008-04-16 ch 197, | abusethat's a pretty response. i love the way you used alliteration and rhyme so effectively. nice work! |
| simpleplan13 2008-04-15 ch 200, | abuseI like this a lot... all lowercase and no punctuation is different for you, but I really love the beginning. It's so true. |
| simpleplan13 2008-04-03 ch 199, | abusereally great rhyming... nice job. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-31 ch 198, | abuseI like the last stanza a lot |
| FoxTail13 2008-03-27 ch 2, | abuseVery deep and well written despite it being short, but I guess it's quality over quantity. |
| FoxTail13 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really beautiful. It's emotional and deep. I like how it sounds, that it's realistic and not fake, shallow or self congradulatory. I love this piece. I can tell you're a great writer with a wonderful style. Personally, I enjoy reading what you write. As previous reviewers said before, the upside down question mark is not needed before a question, but that's small and doesn't take away from the beauty of the fic. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-26 ch 197, anon. | abuseNice hopeful ending. Really great piece. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-17 ch 195, | abuseI love the second line and all the ings in the third line |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-17 ch 196, | abusebeautiful description, though it sounds awful to be up that early... lol |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-25 ch 193, | abuseI really love this.. it's so true and I love the ending |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-17 ch 192, | abuseI like this a lot.. especially the personification of love |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-15 ch 191, | abusereally interesting questions |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-13 ch 190, | abuseI like the italicizing and how hopeful it was... nice job |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-21 ch 188, | abuseI love the first stanza a lot |