Contempt for the biblical mind huh? I like it, kind of reminds me of our justice system. Let the criminal go free and punish the innocent. I'm not a believer of either heaven nor hell, but I understand the mind in the sense of what the symbols portray. I'm enjoying your poems, keep em coming.

Deep. Pretty cool; well written with good grammar and awesome rhythm.

this is really deep...i like it. good poem

I know how you feel. It's a great poem!! Really. You're really good at this. If you dont mind me asking (cuz then I'll feel like an idiot) are you still around? I'd like for you to review my story so you could tell me what you might like to see. It's been updated since your very last review. (Ok, now I feel like an idiot). I'll shut up and say that your poem rox! Its a shame no one's reviewed yet!! Good job :)

~Janet Damita Jo