Can I just say 'awesome?' I really like this, considering the details you went into even though it was a one-shot. Maybe I missed it, but is the man in this always refered to as 'he?' I think I probably just missed his name, but I don't know...

i just realised something: you do have quite a couple of typos. not that it matters anyway. but just for information.

passionate your stories are more than sheer beautya priceless work of artkept to only ones heart

Wow! This was a fantastic story. I love the way the relationship developed between the characters. When I met my finacee we spent the day together, and at the end of that day, it felt as if we had known each other for years, and we were even finishing each others sentances!Enough of my muttering!!A fantastic story. I loved it!

Interesting...the relationship between Luca and Luna is very well developed and very nicely done. The time/place transition is a little confusing, but otherwise it's awesome.

That was really good. I liked it alot. It is kind of weird how Luca knew everything about Luna. The song gravedigger adds to the mood, although morbid, but a good incorporation. Anyway, I'll be on the lookout for anyt other stories you post. Later. Luv and Peace