nice going on this one i havent read ur stuff in awhile but u didnt lose any skill from what i can see

wow, that was awsome! I love the wording.

Thanks for reveiwing my Poem. The last line may be akward, but saddly it's true.. Peace, Jessi

The rhymes were fantastic and the vivid imagery was truly colourful. Gorgeous, really gorgeous.

Beautiful Imagery! I love the efefect ti has on the reader. Excellent.

Wow, very decriptive. TWO AND A HALF THUMBS UP! :)

Ohh, this piece is gorgeous.

Nice rhyming job, and although I think you could have tried to keep a consistent number of syllables in each line, your style works here.

I really, really like your imagery. So beautiful, however corny that may sound. "Frozen for eternity" at the end just gives me the shivers. =)

Leaves the reader with a sad smile-- oh, how I dread winter now.

This is fantabulous! You should enter it in a contest or something. I really enjoyed it =)

I really like the visual imagery found in this poem, and the theme of fading beauty. Personaly I think your third staza is a poem on to itself. Technically, most flowers stop blooming before the windter months, but this was done in the spirit of a metaphor. Thanks for posting.

Hey i'm reading that book you suggested. Plus the book you are reading right now is a good book. I love it! I have it checked out from the public library. So far I like that book. If you could email me maybe that would be cool. My email address is lilpyroboy1988@yahoo.com . Email me sometime we could be really good friends.

This poem has its own glory, and what marvelous glory it is! Beautiful! Everything is put together well, except for grammar. :-) It should be "Smudges of brown replace" because smudges is plural, but it sounds good nonetheless! Great job! Terrific!

So tragically beautiful... the imagery was mind-blowing.

Ah, that's sad, but there's always MORE ROSES! ^_^ YAY! MORE FLOWERS, MORE BEAUTY! Especially in Heaven! I'll be there one day! Won't you? ^_^ I SURE HOPE SO! You're really nice, I can tell by your reviews! ^_^ Wonderful poem, very nice imagery! ^_^ And as always, wonderful rhyme scheme! It takes a lot of hard work to do that! ^_~

Very Shakespearean subject matter. Amazing avoidance of cliche' phrases, considering that the subject is written about so much - that's a good thing, not a bad thing. The contrast between before and after is particularly well-done, too.

Wow, you are amazing..I think this is one of the best I've read so far! I envy your writing abilities.. your choice of words is brilliant.

I love your choice of words, and the imagrey, its very good

the last line kind of gives me the shivers... but i get the meaning behind this!nice poem! and thanks for reviewing mine! :)