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| jadedmari 2008-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseNice haiku-the flow is good and the senses are utilized. However, you need to put it in haiku form, because at the moment, it looks more like an oddly punctuated sentence. |
| heartbrokensoul 2005-01-10 ch 1, | abuseYou might want to edit that. Summer honestly sucks. Every one is so happy with their summer love, that is why summer sucks. |
| ysgrave 2005-01-01 ch 1, | abuseyou left me alonegone to become who you areand this is how i know i miss you |