Very nicely done, I liked reading this, very fantasy-like in a way.

I love this poem on many levels. First, the "star" stuff, I love stars. Second, the syllable and the rhymes were pretty cool! And lastly, the romance theme. I like it a lot!

The new style worked. A very beautiful poem, awesome!

oh cc i like this one a lot! The flow works really!! I like this so much!

Nice poem. I like your word choice, it's very pretty. And thank you for the review. :)~ Tempest Epilogue

Wow CC, this new style you've experimented w/ is very smooth. Couldn't help but wonder whether the "star" serves the purpose of personification or if it's literally a star?

Good job :-)

¡¡manga—shmanga—caramba—catanga—manga!!¡¡I love it!! ¡¡Here's a toast to all the rhyming schemes and their joyous ringing in the chest!! Absolutely wonderful. Thank you. mp.s. Tell the idiot to stop zamba-ing around and settle in one spot and listen to the rhythm!

Wow! Nice! I get what you mean, gt mixed up at first. WOW!!

Very well written, I really enjoyed the new format style, very creative. Keep up the good work!

nice