love your writing style (& joe :P)

I like your ideas, they're nothing I've ever read before. I truly love your writing, it's among the best I've ever read. Well done.

If you want to, check out my story 'Obsession' or something. Thanks.

Hmm...you have a knack to making those jackkass characters...I liked this..and I'm not much for **, usually. The characters were uniquely true to life. A character who cares so much about not looking bad (reminds me a bit of myself) that he doesn't mind being invisible, and well...I guess I already described Joe as a somewhat jackass..I guess I just didn't like him...I know too many people who are like him..who wouldn't give a second though to ** someone in the bathroom, and then acting as if they're friendly neighbors or something.

M, very nice ;) Definitely another favorite I'm adding to my list. You really have a knack for writing slash stories. Keep up the awesome writing! Ciao. =)

First word that came to mind as I finished this story: HOT!

Yeah. This really rocks. I just decided to read the spotlight story at the top of the page of Young Adult stories and it turns out to be slash. Hehe, today must be my lucky day.

Much love,

LlaMa

Ah, that's cute. I've been thinking about ** lately. It's fairly easy to find a story involving them, but yours is more...tasteful than most.

Or something like that.

It's very sweet. I love the characters, and what you managed to do with them in such a short amount of space. But every sentence keeps having implications that I don't mean it to, so I'm going to stop typing now.

okay, so i have this new keyboard WHOSE KEYS YEILD TO THE SLIGHTEST PRESSURE so i feel that i must type

(aren't you super happy that reviewing involves typing?)

So, i gotta tell you dearie, that this was a wonderful blink!

and i also gotta ask how a guy went from having the sweats cause he's gotta SHY BLADDER to having SEX in a PUBLIC BATHROOM

(i remember i used to be kooky in my reviews, i wonder where that went)

though i gotta say, i really love the sentence, "You won't mind if I ** your face, will you?" cause that is so bloody polite!

totally freakazoid and so very cool

*hugs and kisses*

Merry Christmas Eve

heh heh...great!

okay it didn't help that i was eating my breakfast when i read this however it was very good very sexy tres bon xoxo melon

really engaging writing, good job.