This was Bloody friggin awsome! i love ruroni kenshin... and the way you described his life and emotions was undoubtedly true to the character. I think you should keep this story going . I know I would definatley like to read more.P.S this is going on my favorite stories.

Thats very good. The description was brilliant and it was well put together. It would make an excellent free standing poem in its own right but he is an intriguing character and a full storu would be great too-Keith Andrew

I love this ! *o* Kenshin ! I love Rurouni Kenshin ! ::dies from excitement.:: X.x This was really good. Beautiful in a simple but haunting form. ^-^ Well done. I was crying while reading this. ;-; This reminded me of the last OVA. ;-; Thank god the manga ended differntly. XD Well done giggels. Well done.

~ Noelle ~

i saw the words "epic poem" and thought beowulf (loved it :P) so i checked it out and i must say its written very well, i do hope you continue to write this story outkeep writing :)

Must say that this is quite creative...seeing that you started this for a "creative writing class"--lol. Would like to see the finished piece: too interesting (not at a loss of imagery here--good job CC)!

This is extrodinarily done. I really enjoyed reading this, you should definitely try to continue it. Keep up the great work!

keep going, its lovely...

Aye aye! I think it would be very interesting to continue it and see where it takes you =)

Sometimes, going back and finishing old work is the best work. m