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| Kelsey 2005-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseFREAK! |
| Rara Punk 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI like the different moods you created in each of the verses. It's also good how you used personal pronouns - makes the reader more involved. -write on! |
| The Dark Fairie 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI can truly relate to the emotions you've desplayed here. . . exactly how I feel. . . nice =D |
| Spleeny 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this so much...but I think you know that much. It was really amazing. Woah. |
| Blood-Red Amber 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abusethis is good. ^_^It has a lotta meaning.Update soon. |