Wonderful as ever sorry I havent been reviewing more. I found this one a little harder to follow than your normal ones, also the characters have little depth. Since this is an elongated joke I shouldnt expect them to I know but I try to give constructive critism.

hhahah Gnomes. This is really good! thats funny, a chicago boy in salem hehe thats funny. i really like this, i cannot wait to see what comes next.

~William