 BahamutsTear 2008-03-22 . chapter 1Tsk tsk ham is best strawberry flavored. Btw "Good." Not "Bad." and I enjoy a cheeto every once in a while too. |
 laciemn 2006-12-25 . chapter 1haha~I like it. It's flighty, just bouncing from thought to thought. |
 underminingfaith 2005-01-28 . chapter 1I like this. It isn't really a "standard" kind of poem, rather a meandering stream of thoughts. And who ever said thoughts had to be logical and organised? |
 Anninymous 2005-01-16 . chapter 1Wow. You really WERE procrastinating.
*pulls large psichiatrist-style chaise lounge and notebook out of thin air*
Now, let's see, about your problem-oh, that reminds me, I've got to add "nuts" to my grocery list...
(yeah, I kinda borrowed that last bit from Dilbert...and now I'm returning it...) |
 M. R. Smale 2004-12-20 . chapter 1I can definitely relate, I used to only make 1.66 at my old job as a repair man (no kidding), before I quit. Keep up the good work! |
 MaxxRidarr 2004-12-20 . chapter 1You suck, go back to work at McDonalds spick ho ejaculator. |
 protector of the stars 2004-12-20 . chapter 1I understand it completely. It's a different poem, I think, this poem tells a lot about you. Does it? Any way, keep it up. nice job. |
 Sadira 2004-12-20 . chapter 1Wow, this is all over the place! Parties, cereal, grins...It's interesting because I can sort of see the progression of your thoughts. It's random but sort of flowing. Hmm. |
 Amethyst Eyed Cynical One 2004-12-20 . chapter 1like the party/life comparison.well done on this.i really like it. |