 Isle of View 2005-05-17 . chapter 1yeah, can relate to this one too. Just makes you question all the things you do in life. seems like a huge fat lie. Sigh...
write happier poems sometimes? |
 Dark Poop 2005-02-13 . chapter 1I can realy relate to this poem...It's really good...Its not that often that I see a poem that is filled with the author's emotions...Keep it up |
 Fizzy 2004-12-22 . chapter 1 IS NOT OK!! lol... VERY VERY NICE... we do lie to ourself -_-... don wan to deny the truth... feeling so lost in our own world, wan to impress people by lying, doing things u hate most. Really touching |
 D4rk W124rD 2004-12-21 . chapter 1 Hey kinda cool... Also confusin... lol |
 hurricane1 2004-12-20 . chapter 1dude...this is fckin emotional...u hv to lay back on the emotional bits, cuz i think its really gettin to ya...so yea...mayb u need a nice vanilla ice cream with awesome hot fudge poured on the top and u cud get a few nuts and stuff additionaly put...mayb u mite start writing some cheerful poetry...so yea...lay off the very emotional bits...cuz its really gettin to ya...newyz...take care of urself gurl k? newyz..ill talk to ya online...-hurricane |