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| aquamoon222 2005-02-16 ch 1,  | abusewow that's very sad and hopeful. I felt like I was that girl when I read it. It's like a very interesting story in very few words. I like it alot. |
| kevin 2005-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting contrast between the hot tears and cold metal in the last verse.and it's click-clack... |
| wantedINheaven 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad... it almost made ME tremble. It's wonderful though. Very wonderfully done... Definitely a fave. of mine. |
| M. R. Smale 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, and very vivid emotionally. Keep up the good work! |