The title was interesting so I decided to read this one. ;) lol

Love the perspective you chose, its one of my favs! Why, I'll never know, but that doesn't really matter. =)

I like how its rl related, the discription at the beginning made me think that this story was taking place in a fantasy world. Didn't expect to see Edgar dear in this. Nice touch. :)

Little surprised that she got attacked by the crow. lol, thought it would lead her out of... wherever she is. lol

"I tried to force the door open, I tried picking the lock, hell, I even tried putting a flame to it." LMAO!

Well, all in all... I really like it!

Few typos here and there, but it doesn't significantly take anything away from your writing. :)

Good job!

Oh boy. This one = nifty and a half. Now, here's the question.

Where on earth is the next chappie?! xD

Keep up the good work! Love

Thanks for the insight. ^^; I'm not using anymore, it was just here in the begining I'm using here. No more. :B

It's bery interesting and the atmopshere is well done. The use of the quotes from Poe's The Raven, while interesting, should be used rarely, using someone else's quotes can set a scene, but it can also be overdone. You did it artfully, but be careful in the future.

This first chapter has most certainly caught my interest, and I can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the story.