oh my god. that was probably one of the best stories that i have read in a really long time. it had a happy ending but a lot of twists and turns which ensures that it would never be boring. i hope you dont take offense to this at all but your writing style reminds me of mine. you thought out all the supernatural things very logically. there wasnt much unexplained magic or mystical things. if vampires and werewolves existed, i think that it would be very possible that things could be like your story said they are. you did a fantastic job and i am definitely recommending this story to everyone i know. i cant say this enough: GOOD JOB!


~Heather

This story was great. Good job!

I love what Jaylin, or rather *you* named Jaylin's puppy xD

I know this might sound bad, but I think Jaylin did Kenyon wrong...But I really liked the story and can't wait for the sequel.

I am so sorry that I have not been writing reviews. I just loved to whole story and am looking forward to the sequel. Just to let you know that the doctor checkups to the birthing were right on target, I should know being a mother of 3 great kids. Keep up the great work and will be on the look out for your sequel. :)

overall excellent story and i enjoyed reading it. i just hate endings like that though, cuz now i can't stop wondering if jaylin is really going to be alright.

such a sweet ending.* sigh*

aw i loved it and i can't believe its over!! i think u should do another vampire story because this one was so good!

this was an awesome story...cant wait till the sequel...

aw I LOVeD IT! but is it done... somethings gotta happen next but I wont lie. Im clueless lol cant wait!

yes im a newbie and i just wanted to say i loved the 1st part it was great!

YAY! for Gavin and Jaylin. I hope the baby and Jay are ok and stay healthy..

Love you story as always!

I feel terrible for Jaylin . She may have gotten feelings for Kenyon, but he never gave her a choice. Then I also feel pity for Kenyon in a way. The poor bastard really thinks he likes Jay, but I think he may just really be more controlling with a crushed ego. If she is the "one" I pity him that she loves Gavin, but i really belive she is not, and I pray to God everything turns out alright for Gavin and Jaylin. There are so many ways you can go with this story. I think there should be a sequeal.

Im sad this is coming to end but also happy to find it out. I love this story, thank you for writing it!