Great poem. I liked it...it had a lonely and lost feel to me...it was deep.

That path's not as lonely as you'd think- but I won't go there. My biggest problem is trying to write longer poems... You did great. I liked the imagery, adn the feeling I got from reading it.

wipes away imaginary tears...If i were capable of crying about fictional instances..which i unfortuanatly am not i would be crying right now. its very touching.

*sits back and admires*

I'm in love..

Wow Aubrey, wow. This is absolutely amazing. And so well written. The rhyming is spectacular. Hey, I'm listening to the song you wrote as we speak! Anywho, this is some deep stuff. Good writing from an amazing writer. Get used to it, dear, you've got the number one spot in poetry in this family! You win! Just wow... btw, don't be so ** your dreams. Mine are doing me no good, and you got stories that are actually in the works. Quit being so ** yourself about this! Au revoir! Great Job!Tatianna Blusummers, annoyment extraordinare

Oh, honey, don't feel bad. From what I've heard of your worlds, they are vibrant and beautiful. I'm sure 'Becca would smack you if she were here right now :P You know I like your writing--at least, I hope you do; I only put stuff on my website I like. You're a wonderful writer, honey--you use the language well, and your characters have depth to them. I can't wait to read some of your prose.

Oh, cool! Great ideas, unique concept. Like it alot.