That's sweet. I like the way you write, really. The kid is fun to read about, really funny but not the laugh-out-loud funny, the good kind of amusing that you want in a perosn. And I like Janet, how she plays the accordian too. It's cute.

How unbelievably cute.

The last sentence made this entire thing about five and a half times better. I love it.

lol that was a great ending, I didn't see that coming!

the ending was a major suprise, but it adds to the humor of the story. I love the story about the "bee sting". my dad would have never bought it. And before I forget to mention- banana- watermelon ice cream?Loved it

Ach! -clutches heart- The irony! Nicely written. Provided me some early-morning amusement. Many thanks. :)

lovely! it's so sweet and engaging...it's actually a type of suspense to me, how he does so much to keep Janet from knowing about something that it would actually be great to let her know.