 marshbar960 2005-12-09 . chapter 1it's either a crab or a lobster. yet i could be wrong on both. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. God loves you and so do I! |
 Lostwind 2005-10-26 . chapter 1Again, another great haiku by you. |
 Whisper on the Lips 2005-07-25 . chapter 1A CRAB! who-hoo! at my grand father's house i used to go out to the beach and i'd find little white ones! or his next door neighboor who one time when i was there so him put 'em the boiling pot! iz crabs for lunch!! but if ya really have 'em they itch...(i wouldn't know bout that though)
Na just joking Good poem, very descriptive! WWRITE ON! |
 .the twinkling of an eye 2005-07-20 . chapter 1Great imagery. Your words come alive! |
 kaylajac 2005-05-28 . chapter 1Being the stupid creature I am, I was thinking 'lobster' till I realized they don't walk sideways. XD
Crabs! |
 sasateq 2005-01-21 . chapter 1Um, duh. A crab.
Very nice - cute. Great imagery. I like the title too. ^_^ |
 emo (don't ask) 2005-01-04 . chapter 1 cul. i like the description in this. |
 Lady Tauntaun 2005-01-03 . chapter 1Lady Tauntaun says: It's a crab isn't it? Cute little haiku you wrote here. |
 r0x0r j00 b0x0r5 2004-12-25 . chapter 1um...im gonna go out on a limb and say its a crab...i guess lolkeep writing :) |
 M. R. Smale 2004-12-24 . chapter 1Very well written, most likely about a crab (or a sunburned person with a bad attitude [joking]). Definitely keep up the excellent work! |
 poetic abortion 2004-12-24 . chapter 1interesting Great use of imagery ! ^-^
~ Noelle ~ |
 smile persephone 2004-12-22 . chapter 1It's a cute haiku, I enjoyed it! (A crab, I believe) |
 Manuel Fajar 2004-12-21 . chapter 1General scrambles,
Scampers,—awkwardly,—crabwise,
¡Will attack your toes!
—m— |
 Shinji Boi69 2004-12-21 . chapter 1Oh, is it a crb? I hopw it is cuz I'd feel incredibly dumb if it's not.lol. Cool haiku. Wrote more haikus about sea critters. lol.~shinjiboi |
 Toph Gonzalez 2004-12-21 . chapter 1That's pretty easy! CRABS! Kind of reminds me of Mr. Eugene Crabs (from Spongebob Squarepants), hehehe. |