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marshbar960 2005-12-09 . chapter 1
it's either a crab or a lobster. yet i could be wrong on both. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
Lostwind 2005-10-26 . chapter 1
Again, another great haiku by you.
Whisper on the Lips 2005-07-25 . chapter 1
A CRAB! who-hoo! at my grand father's house i used to go out to the beach and i'd find little white ones! or his next door neighboor who one time when i was there so him put 'em the boiling pot! iz crabs for lunch!! but if ya really have 'em they itch...(i wouldn't know bout that though)

Na just joking Good poem, very descriptive! WWRITE ON!
.the twinkling of an eye 2005-07-20 . chapter 1
Great imagery. Your words come alive!
kaylajac 2005-05-28 . chapter 1
Being the stupid creature I am, I was thinking 'lobster' till I realized they don't walk sideways. XD

Crabs!
sasateq 2005-01-21 . chapter 1
Um, duh. A crab.

Very nice - cute. Great imagery. I like the title too. ^_^
emo (don't ask) 2005-01-04 . chapter 1
cul. i like the description in this.
Lady Tauntaun 2005-01-03 . chapter 1
Lady Tauntaun says: It's a crab isn't it? Cute little haiku you wrote here.
r0x0r j00 b0x0r5 2004-12-25 . chapter 1
um...im gonna go out on a limb and say its a crab...i guess lolkeep writing :)
M. R. Smale 2004-12-24 . chapter 1
Very well written, most likely about a crab (or a sunburned person with a bad attitude [joking]). Definitely keep up the excellent work!
poetic abortion 2004-12-24 . chapter 1
interesting Great use of imagery ! ^-^

~ Noelle ~
smile persephone 2004-12-22 . chapter 1
It's a cute haiku, I enjoyed it! (A crab, I believe)
Manuel Fajar 2004-12-21 . chapter 1
General scrambles,

Scampers,—awkwardly,—crabwise,

¡Will attack your toes!

—m—
Shinji Boi69 2004-12-21 . chapter 1
Oh, is it a crb? I hopw it is cuz I'd feel incredibly dumb if it's not.lol. Cool haiku. Wrote more haikus about sea critters. lol.~shinjiboi
Toph Gonzalez 2004-12-21 . chapter 1
That's pretty easy! CRABS! Kind of reminds me of Mr. Eugene Crabs (from Spongebob Squarepants), hehehe.
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