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Reviews for
Nasheeli Ankhein, Intoxicating Eyes
Infinite Smiles
12/28/04 . chapter 1
Quite Pretty.
Evil Cheshire
12/21/04 . chapter 1
I don't think it's overly cliched, I liked it. It's short and pretty. Nice