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Reviews For:
a grey pearl
Aslan Israel
2004-12-22 . chapter 1
Wonderful, wonderful. So simple, but it seems to have a deeper message than if you had made it two pages long. Length often causes meanings to be lost.
Gray Pierrepoint
2004-12-21 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. Believe me, this carries more of a message than some of the crap I've written. Minimalism ROCKS! :D
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