"Imaginary friends, dislocated parts" I think the only dislocated part is YOUR BRAIN! Lol. How do you find the time to write all of this stuff? And congrats! It does rhyme! it reminds me (how do you always remind me of stuff? I have yet ot figure this out...) of the poem that I had ot write in 7th grade, my English teacher had us write about a chore that we really hated doing. With like...7 people in the house, I wrote about our Kitchen. It sucked...lo. Good job though! It makes sense...mmhmm. cya!

Nice poem. Random poems are fun to write, and usually you can't make a bad one. I have a random poem as well, but mine has no real point or direction. Nice rhyme scheme in yours, well done.

i think this poem is lovely ^-^. its got a nice rhythm and is oh so spiffy.

>pippin