This is really good. I like it a lot and I like the way it flows. Very nicely writen.

Another beautiful facet you show brightly with another face. Wonderful idea, wish I was brave enough to try some more names.

Nature tricks mothers,

Compels them to seek others,—

Else species smothers.

Yet, thinking like a brother,

Life alone should not bother. —m—

yes, i definately see the evanescence influence. Excellent piece, I'd love to hear it sung.

Beautiful, I often think something like that as well. I also like the images you used.

I liked this. I thought it was very good. I like the depth of it and the sorrow that is used. Great work.

col... so i guess you made this today! ^^ lolz... you should put the notes to it... like A, B, F, G... ^^ just a thought! ^^ cha! ~Wishes

@_@ Oh my. @w@ I'm left speech less.

~ Noelle ~

Powerful and strong… Well Written ~ Odyssey2469