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Haunted-dreams05
2005-05-30
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good. I like it a lot and I like the way it flows. Very nicely writen.
Manuel Fajar
2005-01-12
ch 1,
abuseAnother beautiful facet you show brightly with another face. Wonderful idea, wish I was brave enough to try some more names.

Nature tricks mothers,

Compels them to seek others,—

Else species smothers.

Yet, thinking like a brother,

Life alone should not bother. —m—
myno
2005-01-07
ch 1,
abuseyes, i definately see the evanescence influence. Excellent piece, I'd love to hear it sung.
Ivriniel
2004-12-27
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful, I often think something like that as well. I also like the images you used.
anastasiawho
2004-12-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI liked this. I thought it was very good. I like the depth of it and the sorrow that is used. Great work.
La Editor
2004-12-21
ch 1,
abusecol... so i guess you made this today! ^^ lolz... you should put the notes to it... like A, B, F, G... ^^ just a thought! ^^ cha! ~Wishes
poetic abortion
2004-12-21
ch 1,
abuse@_@ Oh my. @w@ I'm left speech less.

~ Noelle ~
Odyssey2469
2004-12-21
ch 1,
abusePowerful and strong… Well Written ~ Odyssey2469
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