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| Haunted-dreams05 2005-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really good. I like it a lot and I like the way it flows. Very nicely writen. |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAnother beautiful facet you show brightly with another face. Wonderful idea, wish I was brave enough to try some more names. Nature tricks mothers, Compels them to seek others,— Else species smothers. Yet, thinking like a brother, Life alone should not bother. —m— |
| myno 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseyes, i definately see the evanescence influence. Excellent piece, I'd love to hear it sung. |
| Ivriniel 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, I often think something like that as well. I also like the images you used. |
| anastasiawho 2004-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this. I thought it was very good. I like the depth of it and the sorrow that is used. Great work. |
| La Editor 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abusecol... so i guess you made this today! ^^ lolz... you should put the notes to it... like A, B, F, G... ^^ just a thought! ^^ cha! ~Wishes |
| poetic abortion 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abuse@_@ Oh my. @w@ I'm left speech less. ~ Noelle ~ |
| Odyssey2469 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abusePowerful and strong… Well Written ~ Odyssey2469 |