I envy anyone that can pass of writing rhyming poems as great as that one! lol jus kidding! i couldn't wrtie a rhyming poem if my life depended on it! lol haha. another excellet piece! love the angst and darkness, and i kow how u feel about just dealing with the present. I love to live my life the way i want it lived, and i dont relaly care abut wut other peole say too much. i like how u included that in ur poem. great details and again, splendid poem! :)

BeautifulEcho

I like it... nicely done... nice rhyming too

wow... if you had a chorus, this could make a great song. i love all the verses, can't say which one is the best. write on!

Great work, rhyming schemes are hard to pull off without compromising the integrity of the work. Yet you managed to write one of the best rhyming poems I have seen in a LONG time.

Well thought out, and Well Written Odyssey2469