o...me like this one too. love the way you always end your poems with some kind of bang that leaves the reader in a state of awe of ur writng.

It's funny. Everyone dies, but not everyone lives.

Maybe it's not better to have loved and lost than never loved at all. The loss hurts too much.

Whoa! Weird ending. But yeah, I think it's cool. Thinking of *coughalexcoughhammcoughond* or *coughjamescoughlicoughcough*?Hehehe.

Great poem.

wow!love the emotions that you encapture in this poem. The single worded lines have a great effect ^^oh and to answer your question...i have put the chapters in one story...called 'diary of an assassin-WHOLE STORY' :P and thnx for the review!

Painful… The emotions you express are true to their nature, you can see the angst and pain that they hold. I too felt hollow when the worst hit me a few months ago…

Well Written ~ Odyssey2469