that was truly heartfelt.. iv bin there! my boyfriend cheated on me infront of me with my bestfriend and i taut i was gona die!i wrote a poem about it too!anyways this is truly amazing and im sorry if this happened to u!well done! love and admiration Gretchen45 xxplease review my story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot! tanx x

I love it. It's happy, then gets sad, it reminds me of my own break up with my boyfriend.

Aww what a sad beautiful poem...I loved the stanzas and the flow from the ryhming. Very nice job with it. Great writing.