Freaking kill me for not reviewing this! I suck, but you don't. UPDATE YAY!

Why do I think he's accidently going to be invited in?

Evil vampire. . . Will must really love her, at that oint in time I would be REALLY mad. Yeah for powers that are not controlled.

The chapter progresses the plot further, and UPDDATE SOON!

-Arrow's FLight-WHo is special because she UPDATED!

Great! I love all the things going on in this chapter, and can't wait to read more! I'm stunned writeless!

I'm adding this to my favorites!

THis is REALLY GREAT!

-Arrow's Flight-

Oh. an only if you have time can you review Avalon Tre.

"I would take any excuse to spend eternity with you," I believe that was a direct quote, wasn't it? =DTo be frank, I much prefer the romance sequences than the vampirish hellistic story that you no-doubt intended; but, you knew that.

I, among others, feel you delivered too much too fast. You're going to have to get very creative if you want to try to remedy that.

I'm afraid I would have to disagree with you though, ice flyer. Depending on peripheral circumstances, I may just sit there and let her bite me. However, that shouldn't really be an issue I have to worry about... at least I hope.

Good work, but you still have a bit of a ways to go. Keep it up though. ^_^

this is a pretty interesting story. i liked your last sentences - "he told me to bite someone that I loved very, very much." i like the drama! however i found it strange that will would just kind of...wait for her to bite him, if you know what i mean. wouldn't he run away or something? it would be much more realistic if he didn't just sit there and invite her to do what she wanted. also i like your creative story about how she became a vampire, but i think you revealed it too soon and too much. i guess professional writers don't reveal their whole plot in the very first chapter...anyway, otehr than than, this is pretty interesting. i don't read supernatural so much so i found the vampire info interesting. good job and thanks for reviewing my story! :)

Interesting with the powers they could get, such different reactions, like the chapter names too.

Good introduction, it went a little fast, like when she just blurted out the whole story w/all the info- if you spaced it out a little more, it might work better. But I like how he though it was a joke, and the ending of this chapter.

This is quite interesting. Add the next chapter soon.

Sadism is fun. ^ ^;;

No time can't review well it's good gotta' run!

Hm...hmm hmm hmm...*continued hmms* Wow, this is hellish. I didn't know that vampires could turn into wolves, though, I always thought they had rather limited powers of transformation. I'll remember that. starts off a little quick, but then again, so do most stories. CONTINUE THIS OR BURN! Whoopsie-dasie, let out the insanity again ^_^

neat. keep it up!