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| m (damian e l) 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha! Yes, this definitely sounds like a fantasy. Well, done. |
| A Boy Flower 2005-01-23 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I had no idea you had written something else and posted it... I was preoccupied with 'Inevitably', lol. Well, I found this, though it took awhile and... Wow. I must say... very, very hot. It was great, lol.But how could you just end it like that? It needs a chapter two! I'm drooling here!Alright, well, I'll let you go now.-Adam |
| Darkladyknight 2005-01-10 ch 1, | abuseOh I like this, I think it was powerfully writen, and left the perfect impact on me. Very hot, and very well done. Keep up the great work, now i'm off to read your other story. |
| bookworm0706 2004-12-30 ch 1, | abuseWow. For a roundabout fantasy, you certainly were able to make it something very complex and deep! It would be nice if you continued this story...the Leader is quite fascinating, as is the passage about him: 'His chest rose and fell in a deep sigh as he glanced toward the one door that held his captive audience.' Does the Leader know? Does he feel the same way for the nameless captive? Please answer the questions with more chapters! Wormy |
| tarredglittered 2004-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW, that's quite the fantasy! How very sexy. |
| Esquirella 2004-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was awesome, but maybe it should be more than a one-shot. |
| princess max 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abuseYou *bastard*. This is not where you end PWP! No, this is most definitely *not* the spot. Hmph. I find this to be cruel and unusual punishment, and thus your present to slash readers should be...chapter two!! *grins* |
| Rinfirithiel 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abusewow...that is pretty hot... |
| Ajna 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abuseNO! Don't leave me hanging! This is so hot... Continue this, please! -Anathema |