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| black unicorn33 2005-01-10 ch 1,  | abusethat was extremly well written and really moved me. i especially liked the last line. it was very strong |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseLittle cannibals, But we hide it from ourselves, Eat cow meat instead. —m— |
| Bragi 2004-12-30 ch 1, | abuseA very good point, but it seems odd that you should criticize philosophers and their poetry-quoting when what you are writing is both philosophy and poetry. Ah, well. Perhaps that was the point.And I have an argument: the foolish and the wise may come to the same place in the end, but it's not the end that matters so much as the time you spend waiting for it, now is it? Ponder that for a while.And while you're pondering, please review my new peice "Commercial Break", which is not finished yet but will be in a couple days. |
| erasedcrap 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abuseAnother great poem. I really like the allusions, tone and rhyming in this poem.It is almost too much to take in at first reading. But makes more sense as I read it again.A few typos here and there.Am I trying to hard or do you read a lot of Eliot? |
| Petronia H 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abuseYou want to kill me...?Then please do it. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abuseAgain this is very well written and i enjoyed reading it. Anyways I hope you remember moi and come read and review me I am formerly known as DartsOfPleasure6969. |
| Claudio Sanchez 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abusethink you're the only one?there are lots of dead fathers.and what are you, an ascetic? my leeching ways? who says im every other greedy American out there, besides you?merry christmas |
| Kantessa 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuseYou are humanities bane. For that i love you.I dont know how many times i will say it, but after reading your stuff, i am struck speechless. |
| KT-Me 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abusehello... Just like to say, your poetry... amazing... adding you to my favourites... but one question... I know that was a terrible poem (probably one of my worst) but why do you wish to kill me? ~And If I Bleed I'll Bleed Knowing You Don't Care~KT |
| Cthulhu 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abuseBurble...great, the rhythym in your poetry seems to be evolving with each one. I have read quite a few times now and I have to say that it gets better each time. Read it out loud kids, treat yourselves. |