To many times with a liar,... too

very well written.. beautiful

oo i didn't expect the ending. I like how it is very anger filled and then it is like: i think i love you!

liked. good job =)

*SW*

Thats soo sweet Feral ! ^-^ I hope the person this was made for reads this !! ::Hugs:: ;-;

~ NOelle ~

Arggh! I love it! I really really love it. I can so relate to it too.. oh my god. Keep writing!

Wow very intense poem..powerful and strong. I like it..the tone and mood seemed to flow well...sounds like it could be a song. Really nice write.

I love this. It has a lyrical pattern to it, i can hear it in mi head. Nic ejob.