Really beautiful. Great flow. Good wording. Nice job. QueenVixta

Here I amCarrying the world

Glad to see you writing again. :)

Beautiful poem. I loved the way it flowed as I read it outloud. I love the line, "carrying the world..spinning around.." like everything is so heavy and crazy when you are not here. Beautiful picture in my head. Great piece.

Great poem! I can relate too, sadly! Do keep writing! You have loads of talent. I love writers that can write something so simple, but so powerful too!-Anna :)