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| Autumnymph 2006-02-05 ch 52, anon. | abuseAwhh... I'm so touched.. I feel sorry for Ceren. Really sorry. And I like Rin too. If you're evil and sick enough you'll make Ceren kill Rin. I don't wish for things to be that way though. |
| stormofrage 2006-02-03 ch 52,  | abuseI really love your story and I hope that there is more to come. P.S. please add more of Ax he is really cool! |
| Drizit 2006-01-26 ch 52, | abuseSad ending to this chapter. I assume those two would be important? Or do you just hate leaving loose ends? ^^ I know i do Anyway, again an easygoing chapter, slight tension build up and more of the same old thing we've seen from the past chapter. You'd make a good writer for that i'll warrant. ^^ |
| Drizit 2006-01-26 ch 51, | abuseHeh, nice build up. But one question. Caz is supposed to be a spirit guardian right? Menaing he can probably sense all these auras and what not right? IF I AM NOT MISTAKEN. ANyway, shouldn't he be able to notice Cliffe's still alive? I mean, if he can lead Olren towards Cliffe, he should be able to sense something right? So why not now? |
| Drizit 2006-01-26 ch 50, | abuseOkay you got me twice. At first i would have thought the werewolf Kyle caught to be turned into a helper and helped Kyle defeat Wren. Second, you got me when the bastard finally died. Ah well. S'all good. You wrote one of the best amazing fight scenes in this story for this chapter. |
| Jake Manning 2006-01-23 ch 52, | abusehehe.. cool chapter :D i cant wait until cliffe (hopefully) remembers his past and gets back int the story :D thanks for updating and as always continue the good work :D |
| Jake Manning 2006-01-19 ch 51, | abuseYAY! two chapeter in as many days i feel blessed! really ive been waiting tio read mroe for some time now and im glad your updating again. Keep up the good work :D |
| Jake Manning 2006-01-18 ch 50, | abuseYay!, a new chapter! I liked the fight scene although i ddint expect Kyle to be defeated so easily, great chapter :D I look forward to more. |
| Drizit 2005-10-29 ch 49, | abuseOkay uh... very... funny sort of wedding but finally it happened. I was beginning to wonder if you forgot bout him. |
| Autumnymph 2005-10-23 ch 49, | abuseDramatic. And romantic. Felt a bit weird, coming from you =p Heh heh |
| Autumnymph 2005-10-22 ch 48, | abuseWhoa, nice battle scene. I can almost imagine it all happening. |
| Drizit 2005-10-20 ch 48, | abuseWow, nice cahpter. Finally, he gets some action! And i was quite confused when infinite edge came up. way to go! Be waiting for more updates. Cheers! |
| Drizit 2005-10-07 ch 47, | abuseJenna sounds familiar. AND NICE ENDING for this chapter! Finally! Cara and the gang are back! Plus Olren too! Keep writing! I expect to see more chapters for this story later on! |
| Autumnymph 2005-10-04 ch 47, | abuseFinally! Another chapter! Thank God! And a new character too~ I'm liking this. When, Bal, WHEN are you gonna make the Blood Talons meet the King of Alunze?? *grins* I can't wait to see their reaction XD XD They'll be SO surprised! I really think you've been postponing their meeting long enough. I wanna see I wanna see I wanna see I wanna see! |
| Drizit 2005-09-30 ch 46, | abuseWhose Rin again? GREAT CHAPTER bud! Although i think there won't be any rooms for negotiating with that big wolfie... |