Wow... this is very deep and a little dark-in a Kaonashi kind of way-I like it! As usual your fantastical gift for description shows.

Wow. This is beautiful, really lovely, and well written. I love the way you incorporate the voice and thoughts of the writer into your story. This really made me think. Lovely. Keep writing.

Woah... hold on, let me reiterate, woah... Truly awsome. Flawless. Do you know what a rarity that is? You have perfect descriptions, and actually use words the way they are supposed to be used. You have no spelling errors at all, as far as I could tell. And the emotions portrayed... woah. An amazing piece.

I find myself amazed at this...the way it is described, the way she is described rather. It would seem it comes from someone who knows...but I think it's lovely. Beautifully written. It's a different approach that sort of...elaborates on what people see every day but never *really* see...this is incredibly well-written. The feelings incorporated so well into it... This is the first story I've actually wanted to review after having read several other ones. I love it.