well... i dont get it.
and i think u made a typo: I shut ?of? my feelings in defense
shouldn't that be off?

...wow... -awedness- this is REALLY good...

My god my god my god!!! Poetry is so... DAMN!! It speaks to you, this stuff does!!! You are DEFINENTLY one of the best writers on this site... no doubts there. I can relate to your poems so easily. Holy coffee beans in Haiti! This poem is GREAT!!!!!!!

You are sooo on my favorites list.

OOoohhhh........it's so true.....and beautifully written.

*Shudder*Reminds me of someone.Anyway,keep it up.I want more authoralerts in my inbox

good.... i think that is very true in some cases.

i...i'm in love...that's such a real poem. it's on favorites. it's me incarnate...if the person who makes u cold is urself...maybe it's not i dunno...ahhh i dunno!!! anyway...great poem.

I dont know how many rewiews i have made today. But you are so... you are so... Id ont know i think its because this happens to me too. When i read it i care about you cause i know how you feel. Talk to someone it helps.

Oh. Sad. I like. Was it supposed to rhyme?

deep, depressing, intence. but i think it was really good!!!!!!!!!

i totally get wat ur saying. it's a great poem.