Wow, awesome work!

I like this poem, it;s kinda sweet, and the last lines pulls it together and puts everything into perspective. Nice work!

woW.

*giggles* This poem is almost cute. I'm glad you like your house... I cannot say the same about mine...

Dolly

I'd be very grateful if you could take the time to review some of my writing.

The last line is really cool. =) Made the whole poem come together. Really cool poem. Nice flow and not over done. I like. You stuck to the subject and kept to the subject. ^-^ Great job !!

~* Noelle *~

:) I liked this. It's nice to love where you live.

Thank you for your compliments about my writing. :)

Keep writing as well!

~Namir Swiftpaw

This is great! I had to laugh. I had to leave my old creaky childhood home to a really modern one. I was glad but i miss the character of the other one and i hate the way the new owners treat it. lol ~TRW

That was pretty funny! ^_^ Cool poem, I love my house too!

I liked it. I never really could understand someone's love for a house. Apartments suit me better as it's all I known. ^^ anywho. Love the poem

I love my house too. Great poem, I espially love the last line.