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| Ravyne Black 2005-02-05 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful wording. I seem to start a song then turn it into a poem and think ah crap I did it again, but i must agree this is some very emotional poetry, it is rather sad but it has a strong edge to it littered with pride.Well done ^.^(Thanks for reviewing my work!)Ravyne Black |
| poetic abortion 2004-12-22 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Thought provoking and original !! Well done !! ~ Noelle ~ O.O |
| she's not breathing 2004-12-22 ch 1, | abusesongs are hard to write. nice job here, though; most of the songs i find on this site can't quite capture what the author might do through poetry. so it doesn't give them credit. but you've done well here. i can really relate to what you're expressing in this. love your chorus; i think it's the best part. which is as it should be, hehe. nicely done. do me a favour and check out something i've written? ~k8 |
| Stephen Haramis 2004-12-22 ch 1, | abusebeautiful lyrics, i can really relate to this poem. Great writing |
| QueenVixta 2004-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI like this, very thought provoking - big words for today! ;) No seriously I like it. Keep writing! |