Story of my life... well not quite, but pretty damn close. It was good, nice rhymes and it certainly gets the point across. Good work here. I think I'll add this to my favorite stories so I can read it to my friend. Hehe, you just made a new fan! ^-^

-Spaz

i like it... it shows the emotion well... im kinda in the same situation.. keep writing

This is beautiful...it made me cry! The emotion that you portray in this poem is so profound..! I relate to this very well! Keep up the great work! ^_^

*clicks the "Favourite Story" button*

(whiping the tears that pour out of my eyes) I'm serious that is really sad. It's so true and I like a girl but she likes someone else. Thats a very moving poem. And at least in the poem your guy wants to help the girl be happy.Moving and sad at the same time.Anray Jzitusia