Ah nice long chapter :D I wish I could do the same haha thank you so much for reviewing and I will try and get some longer chapters but its so hard cause I work so much oi. I'm really liking the way this is going and the description rocks my socks :p I loved the part where she gasped when she saw his red eyes and shes like "eh, they're obviously contacts" I laughed for a good minute or so haha so thank you for that good laugh :D I enjoyed it and I'm looking foward to reading the rest of this XD

This is good, I really do like it. However, this chapter was...odd... Who doesn't know how to make ramen? Especially when the instructions are on the back... It just seems unbelievable...

whoa, that was... interesting. it was a bit confsing to read, and i had to go over some things twice to understand it, but wow.

jewel is the "chosen one" and sen isn't, huh? but that still explain the weirdness between mika and lon. and call me slow, but i just noticed... sen's crew and all of the eother demons, elves, etc are wandering around america with pointed ears, red eyes, and unnatural human body parts. why aren't people staring at them? unless their world is also filled with weird people like in dragon ball z (sorry, it was the only comparison i could think of at the moment) where there were some human looking animals that walked and talked normally.

... and the dirt woman was created by jewel, correct?

once again, a great chapter. keep it up!

-tii jay.

well, it's been quite a while hasn't it? ;)

once again, this chapter was wonderful. i loved the comic relief from mika and the shopping. wonderful wonderful story, and i missed it! :]on to the next chapter!

pretty good keep it up sasori!

O.o this is good. Was Sen even created by Aeryl? What will Sasori do to Sen now that she thinks she isn't the right person? This is very good. Update whenever possible, but, as I have just finished reading it, I should be satisfied for quite some time so no need to rush. Good job on this story once again.

Oh no...Uh oh...Sasori-san...I have a feeling that someone is going to be beaten to a pulp in the next chapter...

I'm enjoying your story please keep with it Thanks.

please update soon.

aw, they are so frikin CUTE! Botarin, Botabota, bota-chan, whoever makes me want to die laughing, OMG! Hm, this anikui guy is intruiging. Update soon! Oh, and if you could, would you read my stories? Especially Music of the Night. Wings of Change no tso much, but be critical! I need to get better! ^-^ Again, update soon!

well, it's amazing how i understood every bit of this chapter, and i've tried to think of any excuse that could've caused anuiki to kill their nana. okay, so if he really WAS possessed, then there's some kind of super strong person out there who's evil (when you think about it, Sen's in the dark side and the opposing forces are the good side but are considered the "bad guys") how ironic. lol. anyway, maybe some one... brainwashed him? or... he had to do it in order for... something to happen so he could protect sebastian? well, all i'm doing is trying to find a way to make anuiki sound like he's some martyr so he's really not a bad guy at heart... hopefully. i don't know.

oh, and you don't know how angry i was when sebastian talked about how their nana died. very scry. i don't think i'd like to hear that my grandma was "thrown around like a rag doll and stabbed over twenty times" oh, just one question, though. why their nana? and, i'd also like to say that this very sentence made me laugh. "Sebastian knocked at her door, looking very much like a puppy that’d just been spanked for peeing on the floor." i don't know. it just broke the tension about everything. good job.

i'll be sure to review next time.

-tii jay

Interesting!

a shout out... to moi? ack! i LOVE YOU!anyway, you never answered my questions about the kurihara.

about this chapter. it was WONDERFUL! but one thing's awkward for me. about lon and mika, at first they're mysterious and then they're normal. i'm confused on it. well, i can't make this long, but i'll be sure to review again sometime soon! i could 't update earlier because my internet was bombing. ugh. i'll be sure to read soon!

i'm sorry for not reviewing in a while! i've s busy with volunteer work, school, and many other things you probably don't care about. anyway, i love this chapter. :) it seems like sebastian and sen are having a pretty bad relationship so far. at first, i thought their relationship was cute. you know, it was like puppy love that included a shy, sweet girl, and an unemotional, scary, but also hott guy who's actually a lost and confused teddy bear deep inside. but then i began to think, 'how are they going to have a good relationship when they know nothing about each other? and sebastian's still hung up on kathy? by the way, how DID sen know about kathy? i really don't remember. probably because he was thinking about it and sen happened to hear?

okay, now on to this cliff hanger. how could you leave me hanging here when it's about to be a great scene? now i'm wondering what sebastian's going to ask. what could he possibly want to know when there isn't a lot to know about sen?

oh! and i read the first chapter and you know what i just realized? the man that killed the girls' nana is a kurihara! his name was Anikui Kurihara-Ule... which means he's hao's cousin! oh dear. maybe that's why hao's so nice to sen? because it was his cousin who killed her nana?

i'll review soon! please don't leave me hanging anymore.

-tii jay

oh GOD why stop there?!?!!? i wanna kno wut happens, ohh! update soon!