i really like this poem, the fact that some of the lines are only one word gives them a sort of... i dunno, a sort of... mood, i guess. The 'path' and 'grass' and 'light' and 'night' is really very nice! this poem overall has a very nice feel to it, I think that it's wonderful

Beautifly written, I do agree with the last reviewer. Night being may favorite time, I take a liking to this poem very much...

^.^=)Akemi_sama

Wow, what a great poem. I can feel your emotions, deeply stated. Please do read my poems, too. Thanks a lot. THIS REALLY IS A GOOD WRITE!