Dude! It's really good. Is it just a one shot, or is there more to this story? It's great, I like how it works into the lack of days in February, very stylish.

Kaitlyn

O.o What an interesting idea.

Three days outside of time? woo. Maybe that's where all wasted time gets stored. meheheh...

Anyways, I thought this was interesting on how you incorperated how vampires started. I was a teesny bit confused on how the Pharaoh's Daughter got changed, but I probably blanked out the moment she did. So maybe not.

Meh.

I do give you credit for thinking outside the box. Great job.

This is really interesting. Its a neat twist on mythology. I think that the specific heights and weights take away from the story a bit, just because it seems too modern. You could say like "she was tall and slender" or something. If you want to change it. you dont have to... But otherwise it was great.