I found it! I read this poem a long time ago (I think when it was first put up) but I couldn't remember who wrote it, but it was you! yay. Oh, very pretty, I love the concept.

it's sad but pretty too.

I like how you included the necklace and the comment "hearts aren't really black" to start the poem.

I like it a lot. Only error I saw was 'your' instead of "you're" in the fourth to last line, but that's just 'cause I'm a freak like that.

But that's no biggie. I give it a :)

~NA117~

i love this. love this. love this! wow. so true and.. hell it made me teary!! so like my lost love.

great poem, greater poet! (meaning you)

SP

I love how it is a story yet it still portrays your emotions fully. I love how the necklace is tied into the whole poem, great job.

beautiful...love it so much!

this is so touching. as in, unbelievably touching. for friendship, i've had so many broken hearts off my friends (we quickly became enemies) and as for boyfriends...well, the same can be said. i love this. totally. i'll im you- i have msn too.lazi

Nice imagery, very sad, good poem. Well done!

aw...very touching and cute.

~thanks for ur review~

Wow. That was sad, and cool, but mostly sad. You did something unique, strange, but really cool with this poem. Usually a black heart means like, evil, you compared a black heart with sadness, which really makes sense. Blue doesn't work with sad because blue is carefree! Happy!! Joyous!Black is better. Black symbolizes emptiness, darkness, absense of all life and light and noise. It makes beter sense for black to symbolize sadness. Really cool poem!! I loved it! Keep it up! ~Thanks for reviewing my poem~ ~I'm a femenist too Girl Power!~

I think this is great the way it is! It is a good idea, you're right, and you have made it into a good poem. Well done!

Wow. I'm definitely going to recommend this to a friend of mine. Great job!

Excellent, the more of your stuff i read the more i love it. This is so simple, yet so powerful, so many underlying emotions and images. Lovely.-Keith Andrew

i like how u said about picking out the necklace as so many couples do that.. and its like no one cares what happenes to thoughtful gifts after the relationships bin torn apart!creepy thing is that i wuz given a black heart pendant.. now tha ** who gave it to me is with sum1 else but thats ok... i got with my best friend and have bin with him for a year and i love him more than anythin!okay u didnt need to know any of that so im sorry if i shared too much!again WELL DONE !!on this its truly amazing!love and admiration Gretchen45 xxplease review my story 'Truly madly deeply'.tanx xx itd mean alot!

Heh... sorry it took so long for me to return the review. I think you might've repeated some variation on "my heart turns black" a little to much in this poem, but it is nevertheless nice.~!